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At the day I try to hide my feelings,
but at night they come out, reborn like a phoenix
I can't stop thinking about you
I try it, I try it, but I can't.
I'm with another person, but you're in my mind
why can't I take you out?
take you out of my heart and soul.
Thousand of times I had said it,
thousand of times I had tried,
thousand of times I had failed.
Your presence in front of me
make all my attempts fail
I can't hate you, I shouldn't love you
but in my insane mind I do.
I had said I love him, is it really true?
for a while I thought it was.
Now... staring at your eyes,
listening to your words,
just knowing that you exist
makes it seems like this love, impossible.
Love can come one more time, I know it
Once I loved you, you never really matter
This time too, nothing to do
I really don't know if it matters at all
'but one thing I know: I only think about you.
I love you, I love you
I can give my life, is it necessary to
for at least a minute you can love me too
just say me a word and I run at your side
whisper my name and I will fly to you
call me in your dreams and your slave I'll be
Please, say you love me and forever there I'll be.</i>
but at night they come out, reborn like a phoenix
I can't stop thinking about you
I try it, I try it, but I can't.
I'm with another person, but you're in my mind
why can't I take you out?
take you out of my heart and soul.
Thousand of times I had said it,
thousand of times I had tried,
thousand of times I had failed.
Your presence in front of me
make all my attempts fail
I can't hate you, I shouldn't love you
but in my insane mind I do.
I had said I love him, is it really true?
for a while I thought it was.
Now... staring at your eyes,
listening to your words,
just knowing that you exist
makes it seems like this love, impossible.
Love can come one more time, I know it
Once I loved you, you never really matter
This time too, nothing to do
I really don't know if it matters at all
'but one thing I know: I only think about you.
I love you, I love you
I can give my life, is it necessary to
for at least a minute you can love me too
just say me a word and I run at your side
whisper my name and I will fly to you
call me in your dreams and your slave I'll be
Please, say you love me and forever there I'll be.</i>
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Well, I'm kind of new writing poems, but I want to show and improve my writings by take into consideration critiques of another people.
It's my first deviation n_nU hope you like it. English isn't my born language, but I always write my stuff in english. why? I don't know... but I do. So please if you find any mistake here, let me know it so I can fix it.
Finally, I hope I can accepted here, in the great and big family of DA ;D!
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Bueno, soy algo nueva escribiendo poemas, pero quiero mostrar y mejorar mis escritos tomando en cuenta las críticas de otras personas.
Es mi primer poema en Deviantart, espero que les guste. El íngles no es mi lengua natal, pero siempre escribo todo en íngles. por qué? no sé... pero lo hago xD. Así que por favor, si encuentras algun error aquí, dejamelo saber para poder corregirlo.
Finalmente, espero que pueda ser aceptada aquí, en la grandiosa y gran familia de DA ;D!
It's my first deviation n_nU hope you like it. English isn't my born language, but I always write my stuff in english. why? I don't know... but I do. So please if you find any mistake here, let me know it so I can fix it.
Finally, I hope I can accepted here, in the great and big family of DA ;D!
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Bueno, soy algo nueva escribiendo poemas, pero quiero mostrar y mejorar mis escritos tomando en cuenta las críticas de otras personas.
Es mi primer poema en Deviantart, espero que les guste. El íngles no es mi lengua natal, pero siempre escribo todo en íngles. por qué? no sé... pero lo hago xD. Así que por favor, si encuentras algun error aquí, dejamelo saber para poder corregirlo.
Finalmente, espero que pueda ser aceptada aquí, en la grandiosa y gran familia de DA ;D!
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xD tochi-san..... seria mi sueño pero waaah T__T tengo q inspirarme y mejorar mas o.ó
y....... tratar de conquistar al mundo xD
y....... tratar de conquistar al mundo xD